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Name:   LoveCamping The author of this post is registered as a member - Email Member
Subject:   I rewrote your ending MM
Date:   10/18/2012 7:48:06 AM (updated 10/18/2012 7:56:30 AM)

I didn't like the way your story ended so rewrote it for your consideration....

..." Then as he folds up into the fetal position on his unrolled sajjada mat, murmurs "Subhana Rabbiyal A'ala" and sucks his thumb.  They go to a commercial break while Michelle claps and Whoopie holds him tight and says, "There, there little boy.....its gonna be alwight.......you just let Mommy make you feel all better.  Then they get up leave the studio in their solar powered car and are never heard from again".
Other messages in this thread:View Entire Thread
Michelle Obama Broke Agreed Upon Rules Clapping - LoveCamping - 10/17/2012 7:39:44 AM
     Classless act - MartiniMan - 10/17/2012 9:45:10 AM
          Classless act - GoneFishin - 10/17/2012 8:13:40 PM
               Another non sequitar - MartiniMan - 10/18/2012 6:55:20 AM
                    I rewrote your ending MM - LoveCamping - 10/18/2012 7:48:06 AM
                    I really liked.... - Lifer - 10/18/2012 9:22:22 AM



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